題目

Some people think women should be allowed to join the army, the navy and the air force just like men. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

題型：同意與否

翻譯：有些人認(rèn)為女性應(yīng)該像男性一樣被允許加入軍隊(duì)，海軍和空軍。您對(duì)此是否同意?

寫作結(jié)構(gòu)

開頭段：背景介紹+個(gè)人立場(chǎng)

主體段 1：(贊同/反對(duì)女性參軍)理由1 + 論證

主體段 2：(贊同/反對(duì)女性參軍)理由2 + 論證

結(jié)尾段：總結(jié)理由+重申觀點(diǎn)

范文解析

開頭段

交代背景“女性是否應(yīng)該被允許在軍隊(duì)服役引發(fā)了激烈的爭(zhēng)論。有人斷言應(yīng)該允許女性以與男性同齡人相同的身份保衛(wèi)自己的國(guó)家”，表示“就個(gè)人而言，我同意他們的主張”。

背景介紹：Whether women should be allowed to serve in the military has triggered spirited debate. Some assert that women should be allowed to defend their country in the same capacity as their male peers.

個(gè)人立場(chǎng)：Personally, I agree with their assertion for two reasons.

主體段 1

歷史表明，女性完全有能力在軍隊(duì)中表現(xiàn)良好。她們的決心，勇氣和尊嚴(yán)，至今仍然受到全世界男性士兵和平民的欽佩。

主題句：History has shown that women are fully capable of performing well in the military.

舉例論證：Historically, there were a host of valiant women soldiers whose achievements really put their male counterparts to shame. One need only look at the classic examples of Joan of Arc and Mulan to see how exceptionally women could perform on the battlefield. In my observation, their determination, courage and dignity, to this day, are still being admired by male soldiers and civilians alike throughout the world.

主體段 2

此外，從開明的角度來看，女性愛國(guó)者應(yīng)該有權(quán)在祖國(guó)參與戰(zhàn)爭(zhēng)時(shí)走到前線。鑒于性別平等方面的這一全面進(jìn)展，在戰(zhàn)爭(zhēng)爆發(fā)時(shí)，沒有任何理由否認(rèn)他們有權(quán)保衛(wèi)自己的祖國(guó)。

主題句：Moreover, from an enlightened standpoint, female patriots should be granted the right to go to the front line when their motherland is involved in a war.

舉例論證：Admittedly, gender inequality was a highly controversial issue in the twentieth century. However, now twelve years into the new millennium, women can learn and teach, work and supervise, vote and voted in most countries just like men. In light of this sweeping progress in gender equality, there is no sense in denying them the right to defend their home country when a war breaks out.

結(jié)尾段

總結(jié)理由+重申觀點(diǎn)：總而言之，在信息時(shí)代保持軍事服務(wù)超出婦女范圍是沒有根據(jù)的。我一直相信，如果婦女在這個(gè)特定領(lǐng)域獲得平等權(quán)利，這符合一個(gè)國(guó)家的最佳利益。

In sum, keeping military services out of bounds of women in the information age is unwarranted. I have been convinced that it is in the best interest of a nation if women are also granted equal rights in this particular arena.

重點(diǎn)表達(dá)

in my observation 據(jù)我觀察

in light of 就...而言