在雅思小作文考試中,經(jīng)常會給出大家一個或多個圖表,要求大家描述其中所展示出來的信息。在餅圖類圖表中經(jīng)常會要求各位考生去描述所占的比例,那么涉及到這類的考題,我們需要積累哪些素材呢?接下來小編為大家總結了一些答題素材,我們來看看如何來描述數(shù)據(jù)比例。

 在雅思寫作小作文書寫過程中,比例是大概率會出現(xiàn)的描述對象,很多同學都很有可能會寫下如下錯句:

 1. The percentage of electricity produced by coal accounted for 40% in 1980.

 2. The proportion of electricity produced by coal constituted 40% in 1980.

 如果有還看不出來上述句子中錯誤的同學,亦或是對于比例句型的同義替換還束手無策的同學,快跟著小航繼續(xù)往下看哦,蔣老師特別為大家精心整理了一些劍橋真題中的例句,并且詳細分了類!

 01

 基礎句型或括號解釋

 基礎句型:the proportion 是多少。

 1. Couples generally tended to be better, with lower poverty levels for couples without children (7%) than those with children (12%). C4T1

 夫妻一般傾向于呈現(xiàn)更好的家庭水平,與沒有孩子的夫婦相比(12%),沒有孩子的夫婦(7%)的貧困水平更低。

 2. By contrast, more women held undergraduate diplomas(70%) and marginally more women reached degree level(55%). C4T3

 相比之下,更多的女性持有本科文憑(70%),也有較多女性達到了學位水平(55%)。

 3. In 1940 the proportion of people aged 65 or more stood at only 5% in Japan, approximately 7% in Sweden and 9% in the US. C5T1

 1940,日本65歲以上人口的比例僅為5%,瑞典為7%,美國為9%。

 以上句型難度系數(shù)最低,適用于比例句型出錯率較高的同學,對于寫作目標分5.5-6分的同學而言,以上句型為必須掌握句型。

 02

 解釋+數(shù)據(jù)

 解釋+數(shù)據(jù):*% of 總量 do something.

 1. On average, 11% of all households, comprising(非謂語動詞) almost two million people, were in this position. C4T1

 平均而言,11%的家庭,包括近二百萬人,在這個水平。

 2. In contrast, older people were generally less likely to be poor,only 4% for aged couple, and 6% for single aged person respectively. C4T1

 相比之下,老年人一般不太可能貧窮,分別只有4%的老年夫婦,和6%的單身老人(是貧窮的)。

 3. By 2000, coal had become the fuel for more than 75% of electricity produced and only hydro continued to be another significant source supplying approximately 20%. C7T4

 至2000年之前,煤炭已成為電力生產(chǎn)力超過75%的燃料,只有水力發(fā)電仍然是供應約20%的另一重要能源。

 4. But by 2000 nuclear power, which was not used at all in Australia, had developed into the main source, producing almost 75% of electricity, at 126 units, while coal and oil together produced only 50 units. C7T4

 但到2000年,澳大利亞完全不使用的核能已經(jīng)發(fā)展成為(法國的)主要能源,生產(chǎn)將近75%的電力,有126個units,而煤和石油總共只生產(chǎn)50個units。

 5. Globally, 65% of degradation is caused by too much animal grazing and tree clearance, constituting 35% and 30% respectively. A further 28% of global degradation in due to over-cultivation of crops. C8T1

 全球65%的退化是由于動物放牧和樹木清除過多造成的,分別占35%和30%。由于過度耕作而導致了全球更進一步28%的退化。

 6. These causes affected different regions differently in the 1990s, with Europe having as much as 9.8% of degradation due to deforestation, … C8T1

 這些原因在20世紀90年代影響了不同的地區(qū),歐洲因砍伐森林而造成的退化率高達9.8%。

 7. The biggest gender difference is at the lowest post-school level, where 90% of those who held a skilled vocational diploma were men, compared with only 10% of women. C4T3

 最大的性別差異是在畢業(yè)后最低學業(yè)水平,持有熟練職業(yè)文憑的人中有90%是男性,而女性只有10%。

 應用:

 Around 9% of population in the USA were aged 65 and over, compared with only 7% and 5% in Sweden and Japan respectively. (C5T1)

 以上句型難度系數(shù)較低,但是靈活度較高,對于寫作目標分6-6.5分的同學而言,以上句型為必須掌握句型。

 03

 動態(tài)圖中比例增加或減少的體現(xiàn)

 1. It indicates that the percentage of elderly people in all three countries is expected to increase to almost 25% of the respective populations by the year 2040. C5T1

 報告指出,預計到2040年,這三個國家的老年人口比例將增加到各自人口的將近25%。

 2. However, while the figures for the Western countries grew to about 15% in around 1990, the figure for Japan dipped to only 2.5% for much of this period, before rising to almost 5% again at the present time. C5T1

 然而,當西方國家的數(shù)字在1990年左右增長到大約15%時,日本的數(shù)字在這個時期的大部分時間里只下降到2.5%,直到現(xiàn)在再次上升到幾乎5%。

 以上句型難度系數(shù)較低,完全基于動態(tài)句型,對于寫作目標分5.5分以上的同學而言,以上句型為必須掌握句型。不會的同學,得先想想,是不是動態(tài)句型也沒有很好地掌握呢?

 04

 With+非謂語動詞

 1.However, those consisting of one parent or a single adult had almost doubled this proportion of poor people, with 21% and 19% respectively. C4T1

 然而,由單親或單身成年人組成的貧困人口比例幾乎翻了一番,分別為21%和19%。

 2. …while the impact of this on Oceania and North America was minimal, with only 1.7% and 0.2% of land affected respectively. C8T1

 ...雖然這對大洋洲和北美洲的影響是微乎其微的,只有1.7%和0.2%的土地分別受到影響。

 以上句型具有一定難度,對于寫作目標分6分以上的同學而言,以上句型為必須掌握句型?！静粫褂梅侵^語動詞的同學可學習《胡敏雅思教材第7代雅思核心語法基礎版》中pp78-81的內容,了解關系從句與非謂語動詞作后置定語的用法】

 05

 占比例詞組的正確打開方式

 占比例詞組:Constitute, account for, make up, represents.

 1. At the higher levels of education, men with postgraduate diplomas clearly outnumbered their female counterpart (70% and 30%, respectively), and also constituted 60% of Master’s graduates. C4T3

 在高等教育水平,擁有研究生文憑的男性明顯多于女性(分別為70%和30%),也占碩士研究生的60%。

 2. Globally, 65% of degradation is caused by too much animal grazing and tree clearance, constituting 35% and 30% respectively. C8T1

 在全球范圍內,65%的退化是由于動物放牧和樹木清除過多造成的,分別占(退化總量的)35%和30%。

 3. A German text occupies about 30% more space than its English translation.

 德語文本比英語翻譯多占據(jù)了30%的篇幅。【occupy強調的是時間和空間的占用,所以使用的時候請小心哦】

 4. Oxygen makes up roughly 20% of the atmosphere.

 氧氣占大氣的20%左右。

 5. Chinese business represents 73% of the Indonesian corporate sector.

 中國企業(yè)占印尼企業(yè)總數(shù)的73%。

 以上句型具有一定難度,對于寫作目標分6分以上的同學而言,以上句型為必須掌握句型。

 講到現(xiàn)在,不知道同學們能否修改放在文章前端的兩個錯句呢?以下是表達這個意思的正確打開方式,快來檢測一下你有沒有學會正確去表達比例!

 1. The percentage of electricity produced by coal was 40% in 1980.

 2. Electricity produced by coal constituted 40% of total electricity produced in 1980.

 3. 40% of electricity was produced by coal in 1980.

 以上是小編為大家?guī)淼摹把潘夹∽魑闹性趺疵枋鰯?shù)據(jù)所占比例”相關內容,希望對大家備考雅思寫作有一定的幫助,結合有效的練習和日常的積累能順利在雅思寫作考試中拿到一個滿意的成績。

  廣州雅思英語學校成立于1999年,現(xiàn)任校長是有中國雅思“教父”之稱的中國社會科學院博士、中國雅思教育開拓者,資深留學教育專家萬昌明博士。廣州雅思英語學校是國內最早的專業(yè)雅思學校之一,也是英語IELTS考試中文“雅思”命名的首創(chuàng)者之一。十九年來, 廣州雅思英語學校秉承“教育以學生為本,以質量為先”辦學宗旨,堅持“知識、激情、勵志”的教學理念,發(fā)展成為華南乃至中國最大的雅思學校之一。