在雅思寫作大作文考試中,考題中通常會要求考生描述自己對題目所表達的觀點的一些看法,并通過舉例論證的方式,讓自己所表達的觀點更加有說服力。那么雅思寫作大作文如何舉例論證?來看看下面的幾個例子,希望能幫助大家更容易理解和掌握方法。

 雅思寫作舉例首要的一個問題就是:舉什么作為例子?名人經(jīng)歷,個人經(jīng)歷,同學朋友經(jīng)歷,小說里讀到的,電影里看到的,報紙上刊登的,都可以作為例子來證明你的觀點!

 然后,雅思寫作怎么舉例?小編區(qū)分兩類:有形的舉例和無形的舉例。有形的舉例就是用一些for instance, for example, a case in point is、、、這樣的狗血連接詞來舉例,通常顯得生硬,但很明晰;無形的舉例就是把例子自然地融入到上下文中,雖然沒有連接詞,卻勝似有連接詞,這樣的舉例就像武功高手,收放自如,舉重若輕,卻顯得優(yōu)雅,有格調(diào)。

 小編先簡單講講有形的舉例,然后把重點放在無形的舉例。

 有形的舉例

 常用連接詞

 Take… for example、以……為例

 To see this more clearly, let’s take…as an illustration、為看得更清楚,我們舉……為證

 A (good) case in point is… 一個恰當?shù)睦邮恰?/span>

 Perhaps the most well-known (/interesting) example is… 也許最為人所知(重要/有說服力/有趣)的例子是……

 …is frequently quoted (/cited/taken) as an illustration of… 人們經(jīng)常舉……來證明……

 There is abundant evidence to support…有足夠的證據(jù)支持……

 The latest survey(/studies) conducted by…indicates (reveals/shows/) that…最近由……進行的調(diào)查(民意測驗/研究)表明……

 比如:

 (1) Hard work is more important than the innate talent、 For example, my friend John is a great piano player though he is not really gifted, because he practices playing piano almost every day、

 努力工作比天分更重要。怎么來說明這個道理?最好的辦法就是舉例。舉什么?舉我的隔壁朋友。雖然他天分不怎么樣,但他依然彈得好,因為他天天練習。這個例子很直接地說明了努力比天分更重要。

 (2) One benefit machines have brought to us is that it saves us huge amount of time、 In the case of making a pair of shoes, almost 70% of manufacturing time could be reduced if it were mass-produced according to some research findings、

 機器帶給我們的好處之一是節(jié)約我們時間。怎么說明這個道理?舉例!舉什么例?大型機器生產(chǎn)在制鞋業(yè),可以節(jié)約70%的生產(chǎn)時間。這個例子也很有力地說明了論點。

 有形的舉例比較容易,小編在寫真題范文時,也曾多次應用到這個策略。請看:

 More significantly, living with people of different ethnic groups will enable us to become more understanding and tolerant, which is, of course, very important to a peaceful world、 In my neighborhood, for example, there are people from China, India and Africa、 During Chinese New Year Holidays, we invite our Indian and African friends to our house and show them how Chinese people spend their Spring Festival、 Our Indian neighbors teach us how to play cricket, which is their national sports and African friends show us the beautiful dances particular to their culture、 In this way, we share what we have and learn what we do not, and our neighborhood is always happy and full of joy、

 On the one hand, many people hold the opinion that health care should be free、 They argue that, if the health care is free, people will not have to worry about the expensive health care expenses、 This is particularly important for those economically underpriviledged、 With free health care, they can go to hospital whenever they find there is anything wrong with their health without worrying about money、 This will, of course, enhance their sense of well-being and the entire society will become much more harmonious、My uncle is a good example、 He developed T、B、 when he was at his 50s、 He would be dead now but for the free health care policy practiced in the region where he lives、 Now he and his family are very much grateful to the local government and would do everything for it、

 好了,接下來,小編就要告訴你一些自己總結(jié)的雅思高分舉例策略了:

 策略1:高度濃縮,直指需要論證問題的核心

 策略2:多為復雜句,包含比較豐富、具體的內(nèi)容

 策略3:一般用1句,也可用1短句 +1長句的組合

 題目

 It is generally believed that the Internet is an excellent means of communication but some people suggest that it may not be the best place to find information、 Discuss both these views and give your own opinion、

 范文

 Some students use websites which offer ready-made assignments、 This is not a good idea, even if you ignore the fact that it is cheating, because such websites may contain factual errors or biased views、 In a recent case, a student found herself in serious trouble when she submitted an essay from one of these sites only to discover that it was about Austria, not Australia, but had an error in the title、

 (來源:雅思官方9分范文)

 這里需要論證網(wǎng)絡上獲取的信息可能不準確。怎么論證?舉例。怎么舉例?一位同學惹上了麻煩,為什么呢?因為她從網(wǎng)站上弄了一篇文章,然后提交給了老師,卻發(fā)現(xiàn),這文章標題弄錯了,不是奧地利,而不是澳大利亞?？?這個例子中內(nèi)容多么豐富,多么具體。原文用in a recent case (=for example)引導出一個長例子。如果我們這樣來寫這個例子,各位看看差距在哪里?

 For example, a student got an essay from one website and submitted it to the professor、 Then she discovered that it had an error in the title、 It was about Austria, not Australia、 The student found herself in serious trouble、

 信息與原文完全一致,但這里眾多分散的短句給人的感覺就不是在舉例來說明前面的論點,而是在為講述這個例子本身了。接下來,小編從他的海量閱讀中摘取兩段,看看英美最新的報刊中,別人是怎么舉例的。小編認為,長期閱讀英美報刊,從中積累材料,然后用于寫作,這才是真正的學習雅思,學習英語。依靠記模板來學習雅思寫作是沒有太大出路的。第一段來自英國著名的 BBC,2014年5月28日:

 Sometimes the most talented person can make for(走向;成為)one of the most ineffective managers、 You can see this in sports, for example, where retired superstars often find it difficult to coach or manage successfully because they are now supervising lesser mortals that weren’t blessed with the same degree of innate talent、

 (BBC May 28, 2014)

 這里要論證的是:最有才華的人可能成為最糟糕的經(jīng)理。如何論證?舉例。如何舉例?舉運動員。那些退役的超級球星往往很難成功地經(jīng)營管理,因為他們現(xiàn)在管理的這些人的天賦遠不及他們。好,我們來模仿一下:

 Sometimes young people can do a better job than their older counterparts in leading a team forward、 You can see this in IT sector, for example, where the old people often find it impossible to head a team because their past experience and expertise fall out too soon to be useful any more、

 這里要論證,年輕人比老年人更適合帶領團隊。舉例是IT業(yè)。第二段來自美國Chicago Tribune 2015年8月18日:

 We need an authoritative voice telling people to take breaks in your days, to slow down、 I remember I met once with a young person, 21 years old, who said every time she tried to study or focus she would find herself staring at the clouds and trees、 Later I found she did not have any disorder; what she really needed was nothing else but a break、

 ( Chicago Tribune, August 18, 2015)

 這里需要論證的是:人們需要休息,需要慢下來。用個人經(jīng)歷來論證。有次遇到一個21歲的年輕人,她總說自己工作的時候就眼冒金星。后來我發(fā)現(xiàn)她沒有病,她需要的就是休息。這樣的舉例純粹就是耍流氓,管它有無其事,你只需要若無其事地編得真有其事即可(隨帶添點細節(jié),讀起來就好像真有那么回事,其實都是亂編的!)

 OK,小編已經(jīng)告訴了你,什么是好的舉例,那么,接下來,我們就從學生習作中提出一段,來分析分析,修改修改,加深我們的印象,也讓我們從這些反面教材中吸取經(jīng)驗教訓。

 學生習作

 The situation would be better if people really tried their best to save the creature、 Panda is a good example、 Panda is a typical endangered animal which only lives in China、 The number of Panda used to be less than 200、 Nevertheless, the lovely appearance of panda attract the world’s attention、 It is favoured by people all over the world、 Finally, though it is still endangered, the number of panda grows to 1000、 According to these, it is obvious that the situation can be changed、

 這里的論點是:如果我們盡力挽救動物,動物滅絕的情形就會改變。怎么論證?該同學舉了熊貓的例子。她的思路是這樣的:熊貓是一種瀕危動物,只有中國才有。熊貓以前的數(shù)量不足200。然而,熊貓的可愛模樣吸引了世界的注意力。全世界的人都喜歡熊貓。最后,雖然還是瀕危動物,但其數(shù)量增長了1000。這就說明,情形顯然是可以改變的。

 如何評價這個舉例?首先,舉例內(nèi)容很合適,完全說明了觀點。其次,舉例語言大體也清楚。這樣的文字可得6分,但要更上一層樓,必須改進,必須按照小編剛才的高分舉例標準進行改造:最多2句話,重點內(nèi)容用主句,細節(jié)用從句。小編這樣改寫:

 Panda is a good example、 As an endangered species found only in China, the number of Panda has grown from 200 a decade ago to 1000, thanks to the protection from people all over the world attracted by their lovely appearance、

 把數(shù)量增長作為全句的核心,細節(jié)包容在主句之中。

 以上是小編為大家分享的“雅思寫作大作文怎么舉例論證”的全部內(nèi)容,希望小編的分享能幫助大家結(jié)合有效的備考,順利在雅思考試中拿下自己的目標分數(shù)。

廣州雅思英語學校成立于1999年,現(xiàn)任校長是有中國雅思“教父”之稱的中國社會科學院博士、中國雅思教育開拓者,資深留學教育專家萬昌明博士。廣州雅思英語學校是國內(nèi)最早的專業(yè)雅思學校之一,也是英語IELTS考試中文“雅思”命名的首創(chuàng)者之一。十九年來, 廣州雅思英語學校秉承“教育以學生為本,以質(zhì)量為先”辦學宗旨,堅持“知識、激情、勵志”的教學理念,發(fā)展成為華南乃至中國最大的雅思學校之一。