在雅思寫作考試中,經(jīng)常會出現(xiàn)一些犯罪類題材,尤其是社會比較關注青少年犯罪的問題上,出現(xiàn)的頻率比較高,各位考生一定要多注意積累這方面的素材。接下來小編為大家?guī)淼氖茄潘紝懽鞣缸镱}材,希望各位考生能熟悉這類題材,掌握它們的答題思路。

 The government should control the amount of violence in films andin television in order to decrease the number of violent crimes in society. Towhat extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

 解決這個題目首先要解決的問題就是審題。雅思寫作過程中審題是非常重要但是常常被考生忽視的一個環(huán)節(jié)。我們在動筆寫作之前最先要解決的一個問題就是搞清楚題目需要我們討論的話題究竟是什么。如果只是了解個大概就開始動筆寫,最終很容易因為偏題而無謂失分。看到這個話題,很多考生不假思索地就開始討論政府是不是應該控制媒體中的暴力情節(jié)。然而,仔細一些我們就會發(fā)現(xiàn),題目真正需要我們討論的是通過控制媒體中的暴力是否可以減少暴力犯罪。

 看下面的范文:

 第一段:開頭

 背景(暴力情節(jié)在媒體上廣為流傳,并且被視作犯罪率增加的罪魁禍首)+話題(人們相信控制媒體上的暴力情節(jié)是社會穩(wěn)定的前提條件)

 Violent scenes, widespread in the mass media, are considered to be theculprit of the increasing crime rate in many countries. Many people thus believethat effective restrictions on violence in TV programs and movies would be thepremise of social security.

 第二段:讓步

 論證媒體中的暴力情節(jié)的確是暴力犯罪的誘因。一方面,青少年會模仿這些暴力情節(jié);另一方面,媒體展示犯罪過程中的很多細節(jié)信息,給有潛在犯罪傾向的人提供了方便。

 I agree that violence in the mass media is one of the inducements ofcrimes, primarily because of the ubiquity of the mass media. People, no matteryoung or old, rich or poor, are used to seeking for entertainment from themedia. Watching TV in the evening and seeing a movie on the weekend have becomea part of many people’s life. While being entertained by the violent scenes inthe media, people are influenced by them even without being aware of it.Especially children and teenagers, not experienced enough to judge right fromwrong, tend to imitate everything they are interested in. Constant contact withviolence in the media will definitely make them more aggressive. On top of that,violent crimes have been a common subject of TV series and movies. Showing notonly how a detective reveals the truth and how the police subdue the criminals,but also how the criminals plot about a certain crime and the entire process indetail, the mass media have satisfied the general public’s curiosity. At thesame time, they have actually provided the audience with a vivid lesson abouthow to commit a violent crime.

 第三段:駁論

 控制媒體中的暴力情節(jié)只能在一定程度上減少暴力犯罪,因為導致暴力犯罪的根本原因不在于此。

 However, violence on media is, after all, an indirect cause of violentcrimes, and the decrease in the crime rate requires much more than simplyregulating the mass media. The fundamental reasons for the growing crime rateshall be rather complicated. Factors including the widening gap between the richand the poor, the insufficient moral education for teenagers and the ineffectiveadministration by local authorities would all contribute to socialinstability.

 第四段:結論

 To draw a conclusion, regulations on the violent scenes in the mass mediawill constrain people’s intention of committing the violent crime to a limitedextent, and social security would be guaranteed provided with fewer socialproblems and effective government administration.

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 廣州雅思英語學校成立于1999年,現(xiàn)任校長是有中國雅思“教父”之稱的中國社會科學院博士、中國雅思教育開拓者,資深留學教育專家萬昌明博士。廣州雅思英語學校是國內最早的專業(yè)雅思學校之一,也是英語IELTS考試中文“雅思”命名的首創(chuàng)者之一。十九年來, 廣州雅思英語學校秉承“教育以學生為本,以質量為先”辦學宗旨,堅持“知識、激情、勵志”的教學理念,發(fā)展成為華南乃至中國最大的雅思學校之一。