在雅思寫作考試中,很多考生會(huì)因?yàn)殚_頭段影響成績。接下來小編為大家總結(jié)了一些容易丟分的開頭段,希望各位考生能盡快去發(fā)現(xiàn)自己的問題,避開這幾種方式。通過精彩的開頭吸引考官的注意,幫助我們提升寫作成績。

 開頭一:中式英文,人見人暈

 典型失敗案例:

 Topic 1-The happiest moment in your life.

 In our life, there are always some moments which make your heart flower opened angrily……

 Topic 2- The population problem

 The population problem is a very big problem. For example, in the city centers of Shanghai, we can always see people mountain people sea there.

 Topic3- Is there fairness in today’s business world?

 I think in today’s society, there is no fairness in the business world. For example, I always chopped when I go out buy things……

 Topic 4- The advantage of being a nice person

 Being a nice person have many advantage. I believe if a people always do bad things, he will get “baoying”.

 開頭二:廢話連篇不知所云

 典型失敗案例:

 Topic 1-Should college students be allowed to get married?

 This topic is very interesting. I’m very interested in talking about this topic. Because I’m also a college student and I’m not married……

 修改方案:開門見山,直奔主題

 In my opinion, it would not be a wise decision to allow college students to get married.

 Topic 2-Will modern technology, such as the Internet, ever replace the book or the writing word as the sole source of information? (雅思真題)

 Ok, this topic is a very good topic. First, let me tell you a story: I have a friend, he likes go on the internet very much. Every day, he uses internet to read news or play internet games. So we can see the internet is more and more important in our daily life.

 Topic 3-The importance of environmental protection

 Oh, this topic is surely very important. Isn’t it? Of course! It’s really very very important!

 開頭三:觀點(diǎn)模糊,態(tài)度曖昧

 典型失敗案例:

 Topic-Should college students be allowed to get married?

 I think this topic is very hard to say. Because I am still very little, only 17, and not married, so this topic is very difficult for me……

 開頭四:偏離主題,無軌電車

 典型失敗案例:

 Topic-It is said that nowadays one can not acquire the qualifications and quality essential to success through university education. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement? (雅思真題)

 I think to success, we must have a lot of important qualities. To have these important qualities, we must learn a lot of things, for example, English, music tools, and etc. We can learn these qualities from our teachers, our friends and from books. All in all, we can learn from many places.

 開頭五:語法錯(cuò)誤,慘不忍睹

 典型失敗案例:

 Topic-If children behave badly, should their parents accept responsibility and also be punished? (雅思真題)

 About this problem, my think is if children behave badly, then parents are not right. Because teach child is parent’s responsibility. So we also punish parents too besides children is also should.

 開頭六:過分簡單,沒有重點(diǎn)

 典型失敗案例:

 Topic-The importance of environmental protection

 This issue is surely very important, let’s talk about it!

 開頭七:用詞不當(dāng),表達(dá)不準(zhǔn)

 典型失敗案例:

 Topic-Should college students be allowed to get married?

 I think college students should not be allowed to get married because they are very young and so we can’t take the responsibility to form a family.

 開頭八:意思重復(fù),原地踏步

 典型失敗案例:

 Topic-Your opinion on DINK families

 My opinion on DINK families is that DINK families is not a good thing. And it is a bad thing. It brings no benefits to our society and it is even sometimes harmful to our society.

 開頭九: 觀點(diǎn)武斷,態(tài)度強(qiáng)硬

 典型失敗案例:

 Topic1-The importance of confidence

 In my opinion, confidence is the most important thing for a person. All the successful people in the world are full of confidence. While those people who don’t have confidence, they all have failed.

 Topic 2 - The solution to the traffic problem

 I think to solve the traffic problem, very easy! For those who don’t obey the traffic rules, we should put all of them into prison. If we do that, I’m sure there will be no traffic problem any more.

 開頭十:中國俗語,胡亂翻譯

 典型失敗案例:

 Topic 1-Is it good to have a large family?

 I think it is good to have a large family. Because we Chinese believe a sentence: “Many sons, many lucks”……

 正確說法:Happiness lies in having many children

 Topic 2 -Should we pretend to know everything or admit our ignorance?

 We all know, our Chinese old fathers and grandfathers said: “Know is know, don’t know is don’t know”……

 Topic 3- Do you think one’s character is greatly influenced by his/her family?

 Chinese old words says very good: Dragon born dragon, phoenix born phoenix, rat’s son can make hole…

 Topic 4- The advantage of being a nice person

 I believe one sentence:“A good person is all life safe”. We Chinese people always say: “Good has good pay, bad has bad pay”.

 以上是小編為大家準(zhǔn)備的“雅思寫作開頭段千萬別這么寫”的相關(guān)內(nèi)容,希望為大家準(zhǔn)備雅思寫作考試提供一些幫助,在這里小編預(yù)祝各位考生在雅思考試中順利拿到自己的理想分?jǐn)?shù)。

 廣州雅思英語學(xué)校成立于1999年,現(xiàn)任校長是有中國雅思“教父”之稱的中國社會(huì)科學(xué)院博士、中國雅思教育開拓者,資深留學(xué)教育專家萬昌明博士。廣州雅思英語學(xué)校是國內(nèi)最早的專業(yè)雅思學(xué)校之一,也是英語IELTS考試中文“雅思”命名的首創(chuàng)者之一。十九年來, 廣州雅思英語學(xué)校秉承“教育以學(xué)生為本,以質(zhì)量為先”辦學(xué)宗旨,堅(jiān)持“知識(shí)、激情、勵(lì)志”的教學(xué)理念,發(fā)展成為華南乃至中國最大的雅思學(xué)校之一。