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廣州雅思寫(xiě)作開(kāi)頭段如何寫(xiě)好? | 廣州雅思英語(yǔ)學(xué)校
廣州雅思寫(xiě)作開(kāi)頭段如何寫(xiě)好? | 廣州雅思英語(yǔ)學(xué)校
94 2020-08-25
在雅思寫(xiě)作考試中,一個(gè)有吸引力的開(kāi)頭可以為我們的作文增色不少。那么雅思寫(xiě)作開(kāi)頭段如何寫(xiě)好?接下來(lái)小編為大家列舉幾種開(kāi)頭,希望能幫助到各位考生結(jié)合練習(xí)掌握這幾種開(kāi)頭的寫(xiě)法,在實(shí)際考試中有個(gè)更加出色的表現(xiàn)。
雅思寫(xiě)作開(kāi)頭段如何寫(xiě)好?
1)場(chǎng)景或背景信息,即題目中出現(xiàn)的phenomenon。
2)一些人的觀點(diǎn)(some people's opinion),這部分在改寫(xiě)文章段時(shí)可要可不要,考生可按照自己的情況來(lái)安排。
3)個(gè)人觀點(diǎn),這部分在有些文章的開(kāi)段中也可以不要。
大作文要求字?jǐn)?shù)至少達(dá)到250字,在寫(xiě)作中考慮到字?jǐn)?shù)的合理安排,段好寫(xiě)3-5句話,大約40字左右,并且切忌在段就掏心掏肺把什么話都說(shuō)完。因此大作文開(kāi)方式通常有以下幾種情況:
1)題目中包含了背景信息(phenomenon),有時(shí)也出現(xiàn)些人的觀點(diǎn),并且題目中字?jǐn)?shù)較多。這種情況下險(xiǎn)的辦法是將題目中的背景信息及些人的觀點(diǎn)重新表達(dá)(paraphrase),可以做:
主動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)<=>被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)
主謂賓<=>主系表
某些近義詞互換
Example:
At present,it is hard for college students to find jobs.Many people claim that college teachers should give priority to practical courses like computer science and business over such traditional ones as history and geography.To what extent do you agree?
→The number of college graduates is surging while a substantial proportion of them have difficulties in finding employment after their graduation.Numerous people blame this on the university education and believe that more emphasis should be laid on practical courses such as computer science and business than on traditional courses like history and geography.其后再加考生自己的觀點(diǎn)即可。
2)題目中包含了背景信息,有時(shí)出現(xiàn)些人的觀點(diǎn),但題目中字?jǐn)?shù)較少,若直接重新表達(dá),字?jǐn)?shù)湊不到40字左右。這種情況下推薦以下2種開(kāi)方式來(lái)證字?jǐn)?shù):
把籠統(tǒng)信息細(xì)節(jié)化即通過(guò)舉例來(lái)解釋說(shuō)明題目中的背景信息。
Example:
International tourism has become a big industry in the world.Do the benefits outweigh the problems?
→The acceleration of globalization and high-tech development contributes to International tourism's gaining momentum virtually all over the world.Each year,millions of tourists from other countries swarm into china to appreciate the scenery and Chinese traditional culture。其后加入考生個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)即可。
追溯歷史,過(guò)去與現(xiàn)在形成對(duì)比。
Example:
International tourism has become a big industry in the world.Do the benefits outweigh the problems?
→Prior to the early 1900s,the proportion of people traveling abroad was considerably low and the majority of them preferred domestic travel.However,the advent of the motorized flight has greatly changed our life and it makes international traveling more convenient.International tourism is gaining momentum and has become a big industry.其后加入考生個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)即可。
3)題目中僅出現(xiàn)部分人的觀點(diǎn),而沒(méi)有背景信息。這種情況下,我們可以根據(jù)這部分人的觀點(diǎn)所涉及的信息在開(kāi)段附加對(duì)背景信息的描述。
Example:
The best way to solve the world's environmental problem is to increase the price of fuel.Do you agree or disagree?
→In the process of industrialization and urbanization,the scope of environmental problem facing the world is getting immense.From Mexico City and New York to Singapore and China new solutions to this problem are being proposed,tried and implemented.Some people believe increasing the price of fuel is the best approach to this problem.其后加入考生個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)即可。
以上就是雅思作文寫(xiě)好開(kāi)頭段的方法,提醒廣大考生,定要注意開(kāi)頭段不要出現(xiàn)語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。在文章的開(kāi)始就出錯(cuò),容易給人留下負(fù)面印象,導(dǎo)致終雅思寫(xiě)作的分?jǐn)?shù)不高。
廣州雅思英語(yǔ)學(xué)校成立于1999年,現(xiàn)任校長(zhǎng)是有中國(guó)雅思“教父”之稱(chēng)的中國(guó)社會(huì)科學(xué)院博士、中國(guó)雅思教育開(kāi)拓者,資深留學(xué)教育專(zhuān)家萬(wàn)昌明博士。廣州雅思英語(yǔ)學(xué)校是國(guó)內(nèi)最早的專(zhuān)業(yè)雅思學(xué)校之一,也是英語(yǔ)IELTS考試中文“雅思”命名的首創(chuàng)者之一。十九年來(lái), 廣州雅思英語(yǔ)學(xué)校秉承“教育以學(xué)生為本,以質(zhì)量為先”辦學(xué)宗旨,堅(jiān)持“知識(shí)、激情、勵(lì)志”的教學(xué)理念,發(fā)展成為華南乃至中國(guó)最大的雅思學(xué)校之一。
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